If you write from the heart and soul, you will touch the life of
someone else ... and maybe make a difference. Perhaps that is all you ever need
from 'telling a story,' or writing a poem, or painting a picture ... or taking
a photograph that inspires you. If you just let it flow, you are more likely to
find that special magic from the soul ... just let it go. You can hug it to
yourself, or you can share it with a friend; a non- judgemental friend. Or you
can open yourself to positive criticism, polish it up, and send it out into the
world. Either way, is okay ... as long as you are true to yourself.
Dare to dream
We sit together (you and me)
cracking nuts
way up high in our favourite walnut tree
digging out the flesh
with earthy fingers
preserving the shell for infinite possibility
A little boat darting in and out of eddies
catching the current
racing to the finish line
a pool for fairy folk, dancing at midnight
round and round the magic fairy ring
a speckled necklace that springs
from
Nowhere.
We whisper to each other
our deepest, darkest secrets
Let the cool green leaves hide our faces
Only the sparrows know we are here
Nodding wisely to each other
flitting here
and ... there!
We reach out trembling fingers - but alas!
they dart away, sensing danger.
You look at me with huge blue eyes
And I am touched, that you would share with me
your thoughts, your fears
your yearning
to be free.
I cradle you in my arms,
long to soothe the ache
that fills your Soul
for you are part of me,
we are connected.
I promise to keep you safe!
remind you, of those happy, joyful times
long ago
when nothing else mattered
but to sit alone, cracking nuts
in your favourite walnut tree
And daring to dream.
Amanda Edwards (c) 2012
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Very nice, Amanda. I think with writing from the heart and soul the challenge is not second guessing after writing a piece and editing to the point where it no longer has that raw emotion. Your poem has lovely childhood memories.
ReplyDeleteLovely to hear from you Susan. Yes I agree ... the initial pouring on to the page is where the magic lies ... and in the process of editing, as you say, the raw emotion is sometimes lost. I guess the challenge is how to look amongst your treasures, and work out how to polish something until it becomes a rare gem that makes you hold your breath in recognition. That's perhaps when new or fresh eyes helps.
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